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Post by Renee Jacobs on Jun 6, 2008 14:49:06 GMT -5
Renee Jacobs
{Things Are Shaping Up To Be Pretty Odd}
Your Name: Kate Age: 16 Roleplaying Experience: 1 week xD Contact Info: smile.3563@yahoo.com.mx How Did You Find Us:through another site
{Time To Dance}
Full Name: Renee Jacobs Nickname: Renee Age/ Date of Birth: 5, March, 1990 Grade: Freshman Poster: Hilary Duff
{Losing The Feeling of Feeling Unique}
Likes:
- Fashion
- Parties
- Alcohol
- Money
- Cars
- Shoes
- Gossip
- Drugs (Ectasy, Cocaine)
- Beach
- Vintage
- Jokes
- Cellphone
- Chocolate
- Flirting
- TV
Dislikes:
- Overrated people
- Goths, emos and punks
- Smoking
- Sluts
- Depressed people
- Weirdness
- Punishments
- School
- Being Bored
- Bugs
- Greasy Food
- Geeks
Goals:
- Passing School
- Being Loved
- Being popular
- Get along with family
- Having good physique
Fears: - Bugs
- Guns
- Stalkers
- Overdoses
- Zits
{Imagine Knowing Me}
Personality: Renee Jacobs. To make long story short: Pretty. Fun. Flirty. Mean. Arrogant. Back-stabbing. Partier. Compulsive shopper. Alcohol lover. Intimidating. Bitchy. Close-minded. Gossiper. Trash addict. Posessive. Jealous. Cute-at-first-sight. Rich. Slut-hater. Sweet-and-sour. Criticizer. Spoiled. Materialisitic. Follower. First-class liar. Manipulable. Proud.
Yeah, Renee Jacobs apparents to be a good girl, but only on the outside. She can be the bitchiest girl you could ever meet if she doesn't like you. She's not easily threatened by people, and tries to intimidate those she thinks aren't superior to her. Closed to people she doesn't know, it's not easy to approach to Renee. She loves the spotlight, but hates overrated people who she thinks don't deserve it. Would do anything she can to get what she wants, and she won't give up easily. Lives for gossip; she can't keep a secret for more than an hour. Usually won't take something serious, but she has her exceptions. Renee can easily fall in love, if the guy knows how to treat her. Drugs are her weakness, though very few people know she uses them.
Sluts disgust her, 'cause she ain't one of them; she will flirt with a guy she finds handsome, but won't get laid with just anyone. Likes to criticize people a lot. Won't care if people talk trash behind her back (They're just not woth her time.) Will apparent to be sweet and friendly, especialy if she wants something from you; you shouldn't trust her, unless she's your best friend.
Whenever she's with her close friends, she can be very open, and tends to be friendly, but will usually talk behind backs. She's not very loyal with anyone but her best friends, and will usually back them up whenever she can. She can speak her mind when she's with them, but it's not necessarily good; she'll start criticizing someone about whatever she can, thought most people never take her serious. She would never cheat on a boyfriend, and tends to fall in love with a guy easily. She will try to be sweet to him, but it will come out hard for her. She's still hoping to find a guy that isn't a complete player, and that isn't badly influenced, like she is.
Any Secrets?:
- She was bulimic.
- She does drugs.
- She had an overdose on senior year in high school.
- Sometimes, she wishes she was clean, but she's afraid of what her friends would think of her if they found she was on rehab.
- Used to be a blondie sweet, straight-A, good girl before her junior year in high school.
Physical Appearance: Renee Jacobs, as contraty to what she is, has the apperance of an innocent, sweet young woman. She has very tempting full lips, and a smile to kill. Her average hazily brown eyes are very noticeable, but those aren't her best feature. She's naturally brunette, but thinks she looks better blond, so she's often dying it either color. She wears lots of make-up, and won't feel confident without it.
Though her habits aren't very healthy, she has a lean, toned body from going to the gym a lot; she exaggerates too much about her body at times; though her body is good enough through other's people's eyes. Renee tends to follow trends, so she's usually wearing what her friends wear, or what she finds inside magazines.
Biography: Renee Jacobs was born on the Upper East Side on Manhattan, New York City, to rich parents Julianna Jacobs and Nathaniel Jacobs and three-years older brother Maximilian Jacobs. She had a very happy childhood back when she lived in New York, being spoiled and getting everything she wanted. Renee was also very artistic; she loved playing the piano, and went to ballet classes. Being the responsable type, she would usually get straight A's in school and on extracurricular classes.
Then, when she was fifteen and everything couldn't go any more perfect, her eighteen-year old brother took suicide; Susan wasn't very close to him, since he would usually be out of home all day long; she hadn't been as devasted as her parents were. Once his brother was death, the problems started in her family; her dad often cheating on her mother; her mom slowly becoming an alcoholic. They soon were fighting every day, screaming at each other, she would usually try to stop them, but nothing worked. Renee felt forgotten by her own family she had once loved, so she started hanging out with the wrong crowds, and after a while, she was doing drugs. She didn't care about school anymore, or about her family, though she didn't think her family even noticed, since they were out of home trying to avoid each other.
Then, her parents got divorced, which Renee didn't mind so much, since she had predicted it. Renee went to live with her mother once divorce was over, making her and her mother closer than before. When she graduated high school, she kept doing drugs, but not as often and obvious as before; still, her mom doesn't know her daughter is on drugs. Renee apparents to be the sweet girl she used to be on her first years of high school whenever she's around her mom, which she loves, fearing that if her mother finds out, she will fall on depression and become an alcoholic once more. Renee now moved to Hastings College, hoping to start a new chapter of her life. She decided to study Humanities and city, Community, and Regional Planning not because she wanted, but because she knew it was something her parents wanted her to study. Her dad had studied Humanities too, and she hopes she can keep up to the expectations.
Sorry for the short bio, but doing bios is definately not my thing. xD.
{But It's Better If You Do}
Family At Hastings: Sexuality: Straight Crushing?: Roberts, Ian Porter, Oliver (she thinks he would be a good influence on her) Best Friend Requests: Current Residence: Dorms Major/Minor:
- Humanities
- City, Community, and Regional Planning
{Toast The Fine Folks}
RP Sample: I'm still new to RP Susan was looking around, hoping to find anything interesting that would caught her attention. Every single outfit that she had liked up to that moment was as expensive as it could get. Life wasn't fair sometimes. She sighed, hoping to spot any friends from school, or anything at all. It was late afternoon on Saturday, and she couldn't manage to find anything interesting to do but go out shopping and see what she could find. But up 'til now, there had been no success. With boredom, she kept walking over, looking around at the stores displaying their outfits. If she have had her camera on hand, she could have taken some pictures of the place. It would have been fun. Susan's camera wasn't professional or anything, but she liked doing it as a hobby. Maybe his dad could lend her his sometime.
Susan was wearing a simple polo shirt with white and violet thick stripes, some low rise flare light-blue denim jeans, and black slip-on shoes, wearing her medium-lenght waved blond hair on a ponytail, a casual, simple outfit for going out anywhere whenever you had nothing else to do. She started heading off to the next few outfit stores, looking to her left, and then glancing at her right, still hoping to notice something that she would actually like. She didn't really mind or noticed the other people standing or walking near her.
Then, still looking at her left, she noticed a gorgeous dark green denim jacket. It was beautiful and stylish. Just what she was looking for. She smiled to herself, still staring at the mannequin wearing the jacket. Then, as she kept staring to her left, she abruptly bumped with someone standing in front of her. Blinking, Susan hastily looked from the mannequin to the person she had just bumped into. She was about to apologize for being so stupid, when the girl turned around, and Susan quickly recognized her.
"Susan! I haven't seen you in forever!" Macy exclaimed, smilingly.
It was Macy, one of Susan's friends from school. Susan smiled back at her, glad to finally find someone she could talk to. She hadn't talked to Macy in a while now, mainly because she was busy finishing school projects and worrying about homework.
"Hey, Macy! It's been weeks!" She said, wearing a cheerful expression.
"I'm so sorry for bumping into you like that. I've been kind of distracted lately. Anyway, how you've been?" she asked, looking one last time at the green jacket.
Susan noticed Macy was carrying her camera, the camera's string attached to Macy's wrist. It kind of looked like Susan's, except Macy's was more modern and probably more expensive. She had to smile. Macy's pictures were really good, and the way she edited them was even better.
"Where you taking pictures?" Susan couldn't help but wonder, glancing from the camera to Macy.
Read the Rules?: -lucky duck- Other:
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Post by Melissa Jameson on Jun 6, 2008 15:39:13 GMT -5
Overall this is very good for being so new to the rping. But, I do have a couple requests.
First, please change your username to her first and last name.
Also, I'd like you to elaborate little more on her personality. Especially the was she treats or thinks of her friends, or people she likes anyway.
I also would really like you to add at least another paragraph or two to your biography. Was she close to her brother who commited suicide? Why did she decide to Major in Humanities, what brought it on? How was her relationship to her parents? Maybe a bit more.
So, just try to add a bit more and get back to me! XD
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Post by Renee Jacobs on Jun 6, 2008 18:05:42 GMT -5
Fixed! But let me know if Im missing anything
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Post by Melissa Jameson on Jun 6, 2008 20:44:42 GMT -5
Oh yay, that was much better!
You are ACCEPTED.
Start the roleplaying, yo!
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